Oxmo Puccino Portrait attempt #2

After I drew that portrait of Oxmo Puccino yesterday I noticed all of the things that were wrong about it. I wanted to redraw it a second time and fix those mistakes. I feel like I fixed some but still didnt get it right. But I am happy with it as far as a stylized sketch goes. The head is too long and not wide enough. I am on to doing other portraits now but I feel like this was a good learning lesson for me. I have to focus more on the placement and structure of the head. That's something I am currently learning how to do. I feel like this drawing is better than it would have been if I had done it a month ago!